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Post by Elirius on Apr 13, 2016 19:48:36 GMT
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Post by boogum on Apr 13, 2016 20:10:22 GMT
Hahahaha, I loved this. I could see it happening. The ending was perfect.
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Post by Elirius on Apr 13, 2016 21:31:44 GMT
All I knew when typing this was that I wanted Mouri to throw the GPS out the window.
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Post by Hawkens on Apr 13, 2016 21:43:38 GMT
This made me quite literally actually laugh out loud. I loved it!
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Post by Elirius on Apr 13, 2016 22:09:01 GMT
Thank you, I was hoping I'd at least give someone a chuckle. Hawkens
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Post by neonquincy1217 on Apr 16, 2016 18:01:36 GMT
MY PROMPT! *claps like a seal* See, Ran and Kogorou fics/scenes with just Ran and Kogorou are SUPER FUN to read and watch! And the fact that they're both bad in directions is one of the running gags I like the most in the series. I know someone who would LITERALLY get into verbal fights with a GPS... and she does it cos GPS keeps giving her and her companion wrong directions. Wrong being, most of the time, when their GPS says "Turn right," they can't, cos it's a one-way street and they'll get caught, and it'll recalculate again and she'll get pissed cos robotic voice keeps saying that. Sometimes their GPS gets extra talkative when you want it to shut up, things like that. So I thought, it would be funny if a father-daughter tandem who's got zero sense of direction suddenly relies on it as a last straw, and then ultimately ends up giving up on the device. You nailed it, dude! And Ran falling asleep was a nice touch! Makes the reader think they've been lost so long she just flat out gave up. xD Could've been fun if Kogorou put his rage-mode on... but then again, poor GPS
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Post by Elirius on Apr 16, 2016 18:56:26 GMT
I'm glad you like it. I wasn't really sure how to write it but I'm glad it came out the way out did.
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Post by phantomshyraz on Apr 22, 2016 7:53:15 GMT
Fun to read ʕ•̀ω•́ʔ✧ Though I was kind of surprised that they didn't throw the GPS out the window
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Post by Elirius on Jul 10, 2016 12:47:00 GMT
Fanfic Prompt Exchange #5 Words: 409 Prompt #5: In which the character(s) of DCMK discovers the wonders (or horrors) of the internet.
If she had never closed the page down she would have never known, but she did. Now, Haibara was left with a dilemma. Forget it ever existed and move on or satisfy her curiosity.
She honestly didn't need to know. She could just pretend she never peeked at the history page, but she had.
She had been looking for a recipe for a sweet dessert but closed the window by accident. To resume her search she opened the browser again and the history page. She found her website but something else was right under the website she had been using.
Night Baron Untold Stories… a fanfic site.
She did know what a fanfic was but she knew what Night Baron was. Her curiosity was flaring and she had some time before she had to give Ran her smartphone back, the teenager had taken a nap.
She hit the link and waited. The website loaded quickly, a picture of Night Baron as the banner. The side bar had genres, one was greyed out as if it had been clicked already. She hit the greyed out link to 'Romance'.
The next page was filled with titles and short summaries. She found another greyed out link and hit that. The story was called ‘The Baron’ and the summary was little more than four words, ‘He's always watching her’.
The next two hours was spent reading a 130,000 sub par romance thriller that she could not put down. The cheesiness of it was balanced out with the lack of cliché and well written dialog. It couldn't compare to Kudo-san's writings but it was charming to say the least.
“Ai-chan are you finished?” Ran said rubbing her eyes. Quickly she swiped the window off and went back to the recipe tab.
“Y-yes.” she handed the phone over. The teen look at her questioningly but when she smile Ran smile as well. The brown haired girl then left to go to shopping with her friend.
Haibara sat wondering if the author had more stories and if there were any other ones she'd be interested in. In fact she thought she could do a pretty good job of portraying the Night Baron as a female. She wondered if anyone had done that.
She got up and went to see if the professor was done on the computer yet. She had to go read some more of cutekarategirl's fanfic and work on a outline for her own.
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Post by boogum on Jul 10, 2016 21:45:24 GMT
Ha, cute. I liked this.
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Post by Cesela on Jul 10, 2016 22:05:38 GMT
Haha. Brilliant! I can somehow picture Haibara liking fanfiction. Or Ran writing (?) Not sure if I picked that up properly.
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Post by Elirius on Jul 11, 2016 2:59:41 GMT
Thanks, yes Ran is cutekarategirl.
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Post by neonquincy1217 on Jul 17, 2016 13:22:04 GMT
I love it~ Ran-chan's so cute <3
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