Post by neonquincy1217 on Dec 2, 2014 18:04:02 GMT
Okay, I cannot anymore, I also need help...
I have this really nice (haha, that's debatable) idea about Conan finding out a clue on the Black Organization in Yuusaku's case files on Kid. I've already posted a Prologue in my FF account (which btw can be found here here~). Problem is I cannot, for the love of pancakes, find a way to write it on paper O___O
It's so ouchies cos even I do not know how this thing will end, but that's another thing. I shall address my concerns. I found this idea so darn interesting that I can neither find a way to abandon it nor update (huhu, hellllp!~ ). Any feedback will be much appreciated!~
Here's the thing, I've already planned it out that the first two-three chapters will focus on Yuusaku's files. Chap 1 will start with Subaru-san confronting Conan about his identity as Shinichi. (Problem 1. How will Subaru-san confront Conan, and how will Conan give in? :3)
Next, prologue says Trollsaku owns five case books on Kid, each book misleadingly labeled ("I'm a writer, son. I've got to learn how to hide some of my notes and make them look unrelated" hehe, whatever Trollsaku), thus explaining why Conan came across the BO clue only now. Notebook 1 is, of course, the one Agasa was holding during that Conan vs. Kid episode, properly labeled "File 1412". Notebook 2 (I shall not disclose the label for now) is about Yuusaku and his endeavors on trying to outwit and catch Kid (may also contain allusions that happened in, say, Shinichi Kudo's Childhood Adventures). (Problem 2. Filing these cases notebook by notebook is a real challenge. Given that it's filed this way, for some reasons, I imagine these files to be incomplete versions, even having a lot of blank pages at the back. Do I present these files in journal form? like date, time, info about Kid vs Yuusaku-type?)
Now, Notebook 3, "Raven's Reprieve," is what caused Conan to call his father overseas because of the last line written in it. The last two notebooks are about the Phantom Lady and Kuroba Toichi, respectively. Which leads us to...
Conan finding the Kuroba residence (thanks to Agasa) and with the help of Subaru pays Kaito a visit. I plan for Conan to suspect about Toichi being an actual member of the Organization and the reason he confronted Kaito was (partly) because he wants a lead on what the Org's real goal and (partly) because he wants to ask Kaito to team up with him.
(not-so-problematic Problem 3. How does Kaito respond to Conan?)
Uhm... so far, that's all I have figured out. I'm also in a dilemma as to how I would even divide the chapters, or if it will come out super long or disappointingly short.
I really do not want to abandon this idea. May I ask for any help? Pretty please with cherries on top of double-scoop chocolate ice cream?
Thankies in advance!~
Of course, if ever I get out of these problems, I shall properly credit the entire Poirot Cafe family *hearts, hearts*
I have this really nice (haha, that's debatable) idea about Conan finding out a clue on the Black Organization in Yuusaku's case files on Kid. I've already posted a Prologue in my FF account (which btw can be found here here~). Problem is I cannot, for the love of pancakes, find a way to write it on paper O___O
It's so ouchies cos even I do not know how this thing will end, but that's another thing. I shall address my concerns. I found this idea so darn interesting that I can neither find a way to abandon it nor update (huhu, hellllp!~ ). Any feedback will be much appreciated!~
Here's the thing, I've already planned it out that the first two-three chapters will focus on Yuusaku's files. Chap 1 will start with Subaru-san confronting Conan about his identity as Shinichi. (Problem 1. How will Subaru-san confront Conan, and how will Conan give in? :3)
Next, prologue says Trollsaku owns five case books on Kid, each book misleadingly labeled ("I'm a writer, son. I've got to learn how to hide some of my notes and make them look unrelated" hehe, whatever Trollsaku), thus explaining why Conan came across the BO clue only now. Notebook 1 is, of course, the one Agasa was holding during that Conan vs. Kid episode, properly labeled "File 1412". Notebook 2 (I shall not disclose the label for now) is about Yuusaku and his endeavors on trying to outwit and catch Kid (may also contain allusions that happened in, say, Shinichi Kudo's Childhood Adventures). (Problem 2. Filing these cases notebook by notebook is a real challenge. Given that it's filed this way, for some reasons, I imagine these files to be incomplete versions, even having a lot of blank pages at the back. Do I present these files in journal form? like date, time, info about Kid vs Yuusaku-type?)
Now, Notebook 3, "Raven's Reprieve," is what caused Conan to call his father overseas because of the last line written in it. The last two notebooks are about the Phantom Lady and Kuroba Toichi, respectively. Which leads us to...
Conan finding the Kuroba residence (thanks to Agasa) and with the help of Subaru pays Kaito a visit. I plan for Conan to suspect about Toichi being an actual member of the Organization and the reason he confronted Kaito was (partly) because he wants a lead on what the Org's real goal and (partly) because he wants to ask Kaito to team up with him.
(not-so-problematic Problem 3. How does Kaito respond to Conan?)
Uhm... so far, that's all I have figured out. I'm also in a dilemma as to how I would even divide the chapters, or if it will come out super long or disappointingly short.
I really do not want to abandon this idea. May I ask for any help? Pretty please with cherries on top of double-scoop chocolate ice cream?
Thankies in advance!~
Of course, if ever I get out of these problems, I shall properly credit the entire Poirot Cafe family *hearts, hearts*