Post by doctorpeggy on Jan 2, 2020 15:46:46 GMT
I was not going to get enough of this done as soon as I'd have liked to... so here's a really really tiny snippet of a fic I've started writing.
It's a what-if-Hakuba-was-also-shrunk-into-a-kid fic, so it's nothing new, and really I just started writing it because I wanna have some fun with Hakuba's character. So... yeah. I thought I'd just post it and see if anyone had anything to say. I imagine I'll post it on ff.net or Ao3 or something eventually. It's a really rough version, so if anyone has any suggestions I'd be happy to hear them (though there isn't much to give suggestions on).
But yeah, I'm so going to torture Hakuba... there's this weird sort of pleasure I get from using dramatic tension, and really this fic is just and excuse for me to abuse that power.
I hope you like it!
DoctorPeggy
Saguru had always figured that one day his luck would run out, but he hadn’t imagined it would be so soon.
Admitted, this also was partly his own fault, because he had not considered the consequences of following those men into an alleyway in the middle of the night, but it was late and he was tired, and he had used up all his brain cells at the KID heist anyway.
He cursed his impulsiveness as a wave of pain rolled over him.
The worst part of it all was that he’d never even get to the end of this case. Somewhere in the city those men, dressed from head to toe in black, would be covering their tracks. It made Saguru feel wretched. It wasn’t something many people would notice, but Saguru had seen, because he was a detective, a killer’s coldness in that man’s eyes. The other was wearing dark glasses so his eyes were hidden, but Saguru could be sure that the eyes of the man with the long hair were those of someone who had killed in cold blood, and he had just let that man escape.
And given that he was currently dying in an alleyway, he wouldn’t be catching those men anytime soon.
It's a what-if-Hakuba-was-also-shrunk-into-a-kid fic, so it's nothing new, and really I just started writing it because I wanna have some fun with Hakuba's character. So... yeah. I thought I'd just post it and see if anyone had anything to say. I imagine I'll post it on ff.net or Ao3 or something eventually. It's a really rough version, so if anyone has any suggestions I'd be happy to hear them (though there isn't much to give suggestions on).
But yeah, I'm so going to torture Hakuba... there's this weird sort of pleasure I get from using dramatic tension, and really this fic is just and excuse for me to abuse that power.
I hope you like it!
DoctorPeggy
Saguru had always figured that one day his luck would run out, but he hadn’t imagined it would be so soon.
Admitted, this also was partly his own fault, because he had not considered the consequences of following those men into an alleyway in the middle of the night, but it was late and he was tired, and he had used up all his brain cells at the KID heist anyway.
He cursed his impulsiveness as a wave of pain rolled over him.
The worst part of it all was that he’d never even get to the end of this case. Somewhere in the city those men, dressed from head to toe in black, would be covering their tracks. It made Saguru feel wretched. It wasn’t something many people would notice, but Saguru had seen, because he was a detective, a killer’s coldness in that man’s eyes. The other was wearing dark glasses so his eyes were hidden, but Saguru could be sure that the eyes of the man with the long hair were those of someone who had killed in cold blood, and he had just let that man escape.
And given that he was currently dying in an alleyway, he wouldn’t be catching those men anytime soon.