silvercyanide
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Post by silvercyanide on Oct 18, 2015 7:09:59 GMT
Wow, looks like I'm first. I don't really know what to write for this prompt so forgive me please prompter if this wasn't what you had in mind. I tried ;-;
Title: Daze
Word Count: 221
Prompt: "Ran is sick with the flu and Conan has to take care of her for the day, until Mouri returns home. Delirious Ran thinks Conan is Shinichi turned into a child." Editing it in cause my wifi is good enough to load pages again! Joy.
Her head felt fuzzy and her ears felt stuffed with cotton wool. It was not a pleasant feeling. She would've called for her dad and ask him to get some medicine but he'd just gone out for the day and wouldn't be back until that evening which was approximately 7 hours later.
Ran struggled to force her unwilling body up and stumbled down the stairs, face a cherry red and eyes dazed and unfocused. It wasn't often that she fell sick but when she did, it hit hard and it lasted long. She tripped slightly, depth perception gone all haywire with the fever and collapsed where she stood, panting hard and struggling to stay awake.
"Ran-neechan!"
Who was calling her?
Ran looked up and saw a tiny figure sprinting towards her, blue eyes --so so blue-- glimmering with unconcealed worry. Her head felt so heavy and she let it dip down, hearing a cry of panic come from behind her.
"Ran!"
Shinichi? Shinichi was here?
Ran looked up at Conan but all she could see was that familiar pair of blue, blue eyes. Shinichi's eyes. She felt tears rise unbidden, felt them cascade down her cheeks, saw Shinichi's eyes grow wide with shock. Before she fell unconscious, she murmured a word and saw the resulting fear and panic that arose.
"Shinichi..."
Ack. Not my best work.
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Post by Mikauzoran on Oct 18, 2015 13:18:33 GMT
Hey there! Could you please include the prompt you received at the top? Thank you!
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Post by Elirius on Oct 22, 2015 6:56:23 GMT
I like it. I think you did awesome with how Conan responses to being called Shinichi.
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