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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on May 15, 2015 18:48:34 GMT
So we were having a writing competition in my creative writing class today, and the prompt was "Write a poem or story that is no more than two sentences." This is what I came up with, and now I want to turn it into a full-blown story. Anyway, here it is:
“You no longer belong here!” she exclaimed as she struck the now-former angel’s wings, causing the edges to curl up and start disintegrating. He screamed in pain as he lost his ability to keep afloat and plummeted down through the trees, branches tearing gashes through his skin, and plunged into a lake below, the water swallowing him, refusing to let him go.
Anyone have any suggestions?
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Post by rainbowcupcake on May 15, 2015 20:41:08 GMT
Uhh .. an angel rebel that thought God's commands, or wishes or whatever, were not good? Or maybe he wants to overthrow God? An angel falls in love with a human, but he's not allowed to, so he gets banned from heaven? (This sounds so stereotypical) The earth is in danger, like apocalypse kind of danger, and this angel wants to help the humans, but God doesn't want him to interfere (for whatever reasons), so they make him mortal and then he tries to stop whatever's happening as a human? Or tries to become an angel again. These don't sound that great, but I can't think of anything better right now.
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on May 15, 2015 23:42:31 GMT
Yeah, I was thinking more along the lines of something he did. And rather than being under God's charge, I was thinking more along the lines of an independent community of angels. Almost like humans with wings, except they live in the sky. Or maybe it could be that they all used to humans, but due to something, some of the humans turned into angels, and when they had kids, those kids were angels as well . . . *sinks into thoughts*
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Post by faliara on May 24, 2015 9:14:42 GMT
So the angel did a grave mistake, and his wings were torn away as punishment? Maybe he's a jerkass who ended up learning compassion on Earth, and chose to stay on Earth? I dunno.
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