Finnian Donovan
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Post by Finnian Donovan on May 7, 2015 12:47:10 GMT
So, I guess I've started planning out what Kaito and Shinichi looks like for this shinobi (Naruto heavy basis + InuYasha) DCMK AU. Like I've said in a post earlier, I've decided that instead of shrinking into Conan, Shinichi ends up unlocking physical traits that have been present in his lineage (and since Kaito is his sibling in this AU as well... you get the drift). And since the earlier post, I've decided to swap which InuYasha character bijuu is being contained in Kaito, i.e. I've gone with the kitsune Shippo. Without further ado, I present to you my character design for kitsune!Kaito. What do you guys think? Have I gone overboard? Does Kai-chan still look somewhat recognisable? Does he look more like Shippo instead? Let me know, okay guys?
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Post by StarlightDragons on May 7, 2015 16:37:27 GMT
...that's kaito?
personally, I had no idea who he was until I read what you wrote. I think you should keep some of kaito's more distinguishable parts of his hair, maybe? or the eyes? otherwise the only part that looks like him is the smirk, and that doesn't do much, considering a lot of people tend to smirk XD
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on May 8, 2015 2:49:48 GMT
He's "based" on Shippo? XD Yeah, I basically agree with Starlight (again XD), so . . .
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Post by Mikauzoran on May 10, 2015 12:30:42 GMT
Yeah, unfortunately that looks nothing like Kaito. I recognize the Shippo hair, though. I don't really know what you could do to fix that, though, so that he's recognizable as Kaito.
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kkrazy256
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Post by kkrazy256 on May 10, 2015 15:32:40 GMT
If you would like suggestions to make him look more like Kaito: You could probably change the color of his hair to something more similar to Kaito's hair color. But you could still include the kitsune color (in a form of a stripe of hair or something like that?) And you could probably add some of Kaito's trademark spiky hair to the crown of his head.
But it's your design, so your decision. ^^ I really like the idea though. The art is nice, keep up the good work.
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Post by SharaRaizel on May 20, 2015 4:56:00 GMT
Oooh! Interesting concept.
Like what everyone else has been saying, he looks more like an older version of Shippo instead of Kaito. I reccomend ( like kkrazy256) that you change the hair and eye color to look closer to Kaito. Maybe mix them up a bit, (again, like kkrazy256 recommended) like giving him highlights in Shippo's hair color, or because Kaito has blue eyes and Kid tends to be characterized as having violet eyes, give him mismatching eyes? The top of the head is looking a little too sleek and neat for Kaito (but not perhaps for Shinichi? Just add the cowlick.) so (again, like the others) try ruffling it up a bit.
I think this is a neat crossover idea and I can't wait to see what you do next! ^_^
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