neonquincy1217
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Post by neonquincy1217 on Apr 18, 2015 18:17:31 GMT
This is really cute~ Are you gonna make this into a fic? :3
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Katrinka
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I'm back, studying the first year of second high school in Prague. ^.^
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Post by Katrinka on Apr 20, 2015 16:43:50 GMT
Mikauzoran: She lived in Kansai for two years in her early childhood (4-6 years) with her grandma, but she doesn't speak with their dialect. Actually it doesn't have a good reason, but she speaks really fast often and the difference between her I'm/I am is very small so I wrote "I'm" form. neonquincy1217: Thanks. ^.^ Yeah, it'll be a fic. But first of all I must write at least a beginning chapters in Czech and translate it to English, 'cause writing in English is something new to me still and writing a story longer than 1,000 words just in English without a Czech base is tough proposition. :\
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Apr 20, 2015 18:35:34 GMT
Sounds interesting!
("It hasn't a good reason" sounds better as "it doesn't have a good reason". "and difference" --> "and the difference". "a first chapters" --> "a beginning chapter" or "a few beginning chapters" ["a" by itself is only for singular, and using "beginning" sounds better when you already have the two "first"s so close to each other in the sentence]. "and write story longer than" --> "and writing a story longer than". "just in English without Czech base" --> "just in English without a Czech base" [because of the noun "base", there should be an "a" before the "Czech" adjective])
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Windbritsle
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Post by Windbritsle on Apr 20, 2015 19:26:59 GMT
The drawing was ZOE funny! I totawwy cracked up!
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Katrinka
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Post by Katrinka on Apr 21, 2015 10:39:45 GMT
Thanks. But... what is ZOE funny? I hear it for the first time and Google doesn't help me. o.o Fuuuh... Today I went to doctor and I when I was waiting to a next train to our town I sketched this in 10 minuts. Originally it was Kaito, Aoko and their children, but when I'm thinking abou that it more looks like Shinichi and Ran. I hope that digital version will be better.
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Apr 21, 2015 13:16:05 GMT
"ZOE" is Windy's personal way of saying "so". I don't think it would be on google . . .
Looks good!
("I hear it for the first time", in this context, "This is the first time I've heard it". "Today I went to doctor" --> "Today I went to the doctor". "and I when" --> "and when". "waiting to a next train" --> "waiting for the next train". "but when I'm thinking abou that it" --> "but when I was thinking about that, it". "I hope that digital version will be better" --> "I hope that the digital version will be better")
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Post by assasin8 on Apr 21, 2015 16:01:13 GMT
Aww, they all look great! Can't wait to see it digitized ^_^
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Katrinka
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Post by Katrinka on Apr 22, 2015 17:39:30 GMT
Nikudou Natsumi: Really? Oh, I see. Funny, but why not? xD Thanks, Natsumi-chan. I always forget to "a", "an" and "the". -.-' I'm terrible at it! assasin8: Thanks, I hope you'll like it. A moment ago I have been searching my DeviantArt and I found this. It's fanart from 2011 when I've started watching DC. It was just: "What? I didn't draw it! It's not my work!" But now I think that it's okay.
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Post by SharaRaizel on Apr 22, 2015 20:47:00 GMT
Oooh! I love the colors on this!
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Post by StarlightDragons on Apr 22, 2015 21:06:36 GMT
ooh, looks nice! //bops Katrinka on the nose and whispers you're not terrible, you're actually really good at holding your own in English - it's just the silly little details ^^
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Windbritsle
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Post by Windbritsle on Apr 22, 2015 21:18:20 GMT
Nicely drawn~
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Post by assasin8 on Apr 22, 2015 22:48:32 GMT
ran looks great! i certainly would never be able to draw/color ANYTHING this well on paper!
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neonquincy1217
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Post by neonquincy1217 on Apr 25, 2015 6:56:52 GMT
Ran's so cuuute~ :"3 One little question: what did you use on this one, colored pencils?
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Katrinka
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Post by Katrinka on Apr 25, 2015 9:39:33 GMT
Thanks, minna! I'm still not so sure that it's something very amazing, but as well I'm glad that you like it. Maybe I'm going to try coloring with colored pencils again in near future. But I don't know when 'cause I don't own it (We don't use colored pencils on High School although I'm studying Printing and Graphic Arts). neonquincy1217: Yeah, it was colored with color pencils (probably from Maped, it's my favorite brand for pencils). assasin8: I'm sure you'll be able to do it. If not today then maybe tomorrow, next month, year... But you must try it, because you can get it if you really want. StarlightDragons: Yeah... little details. But exactly those little details like "an", word order or forgettenn word when I'm speaking or writing something are more than a small problem for my school teacher and my grades from English. -.-' EDIT: Oh, I almost forgot! "Kuroba Family Photo" is in progress. Characters are little older than on sketch and today I want to finish lineart. So I have to draw Kaito and Aoko yet. And rework some details.
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Katrinka
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Post by Katrinka on May 27, 2015 12:36:55 GMT
Work in ProgressAfter very, very, very long time I bought new coloured pencils yesterday (YEEES!) and I had to try them today 'cause I was not in school. Originally I sketched character from my original story, but later she was replaced with Eri Kisaki. I'm thinking about adding Kogoro, Shinichi and Ran. ^.~ But my ability to draw hands is really bad... -.-' The dress is inspirated by fashion magazine what arrived this morning. Oh, I almost forget - someone asked me about my DeviantArt.
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