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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Apr 6, 2015 3:22:29 GMT
So this is from Mikau's fanfic, "What's really Inside". I believe it's the last poem you see Mask put up on whatever website he was putting his poems up on. It's also the poem that Kaito dropped. With Mikau's permission, I was able to try and recreate it ^-^ So, a couple of notes first. Because I can't write calligraphy, I decided to write it in cursive instead. I'm not really sure how I feel about the word "dance", but on the other hand I love how "tainted" came out, and "stain" is my absolute favorite Oh, and "blood" looks much more drippy in person. So, without further ado . . .
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Post by Mikauzoran on Apr 6, 2015 3:35:58 GMT
*Squeals* I LOVE it!! Such a good job! Mask couldn't have done better himself. ^.~
I like how dance wiggles and feathers is molting! Stained and tainted look wonderful, and I really, really like the distinction you made in the two yous. The first one looks fond and affectionate while the second looks deified. I love it!
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Post by Faliara on Apr 6, 2015 3:41:57 GMT
Better than my attempt, certainly ^_^
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Apr 6, 2015 3:46:28 GMT
Thanks! I wonder what Kaito thinks about that statement, heh heh . . . Well, I copied your description the best I could ^-^ Heehee, I think the shining lines helped the second to look more deified. Thanks for telling me what each was supposed to imply. Oh, right, something I forgot to mention before. I replaced the roses in your description with daisies. The main reason for that was because, after trying like five times, I still couldn't draw a rose right. So I decided daisies would just be easier. Also, I added the part where "black" and "dark" are darker than the rest of the words. Thought it'd fit Mask's style.
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neonkoi
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Does anyone else occasionally fear the wrath of their plot bunnies?
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Post by neonkoi on Jul 14, 2015 5:08:04 GMT
That was amazing.. I need to check out the fic it's based on.
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