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Post by LaurelWreath on Feb 21, 2015 17:42:57 GMT
Ah. So your fic is going to have Kaito and Eisuke meeting for the theme? (If so, sweet. Have NOT seen a fic on Eisuke worth reading yet. Hopefully, yours will be the first. )
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Feb 22, 2015 3:45:01 GMT
Rather, meeting for the first time in 8+ years, but yeah. I don't think I'll go into much detail about it, though. But, you know, one of Eisuke's most common attributes in the home/hideout of Kaitou Kid . . . Eventually something's bound to happen, so I hope it'll be fun ^-^
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Post by Mikauzoran on Feb 22, 2015 18:10:00 GMT
Today is the day that I figure out Hattori Heiji! ...Somehow I feel this is going to be awkward. I mean...we've known each other for eleven years now, but...we've never really spoken much. :/
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Feb 22, 2015 18:38:27 GMT
You can do it, Mikau!
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Post by Mikauzoran on Feb 22, 2015 23:14:36 GMT
Thanks, Natsumi! You know, I think I'm over-thinking this. I did just fine creating my own "Sera". I should be fine with my "Heiji" too. Except I don't think he has any dark secrets or anything. I mean, he's not hiding anything. He's just...socially awkward. Maybe he's insecure about something? Hmm.
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Post by neonquincy1217 on Feb 23, 2015 5:19:17 GMT
Insecure about something, hmm... *thinks hard*
That's probably it. I mean, I always think of Heiji as a more awkward version of airhead-Shinichi if ever he didn't shrink to a grade school kid. Like, he's got his head stuck up some cloud and the only things keeping him back down is a physical damage from Kazuha and the reality that even a shrunken rival can outwit him or something... Hm, maybe that's why he (probably unconsciously) tends to look for other people's flaws, like what he did when he first met Sera, or when he always teases Conan about being tiny or something.
Also, he gets mad pretty easily. But let's face it, that HOTtori's quite a tsundere! XDD
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Post by Mikauzoran on Feb 24, 2015 1:20:44 GMT
*Looks at word count* 2858. And they've just now officially met. Shoot. Why am I so long-winded?!
Maybe if I take out all the superfluous past perfect? I simply adore it, but I fear I overuse it and end up sounding pretentious. Do I sound pretentious? Of course I do. I use words like superfluous and pretentious. -.-;
Heiji is going well, though. He's the least troublesome of pretty much everyone. I really like him. ^.^
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Post by ichthyophobia on Feb 24, 2015 1:44:10 GMT
If it's superfluous, I'd say take it out. And I don't think past perfect sounds pretentious, but it can definitely slow things down quite a bit. I mean, if it's necessary, leave it, but unless there's a timeline or sequence of events involved it's not usually necessary. But yay for Heiji, anyway. And I have now set a new personal record of completely starting over three times. This theme is not as easy as I thought it would be.
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Post by Mikauzoran on Feb 24, 2015 5:13:16 GMT
Three times?? Yikes.
...It's too long. I'm not going to have space to create a satisfying relationship. I'm going to have to scrap this whole fic and come up with something else for the contest! 。・°°・(>_<)・°°・。But I was sooo happy with it!!!
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Feb 24, 2015 5:14:25 GMT
The trouble I'm having is getting Kaito and Eisuke to the place I want them to be (though as I type this, an idea comes to mind . . .). That, and finding out what to do afterward.
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Feb 24, 2015 5:15:51 GMT
( T.T)\(-_- ) That's horrible, Mikau. Maybe you can still do that idea, just not for the contest?
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Post by Mikauzoran on Feb 24, 2015 19:30:51 GMT
TwT I did it! It's not too long after all!!! I can still use it for the contest!
I didn't get to put in everything I wanted to, but I still think it's a good story, and I'm happy with the way it turned out. I'm going to go back through and edit a little, but I think it's good. Maybe I'll eventually go back and flesh out the scenes that I narrated.
I'm so proud! ^o^ It was my first time writing Heiji, and, for the first time ever, I wrote a friendship fic! Two Gosho boys spent the whole summer together, and there was no BL! Well, I'm sure you could find some if you squinted really hard. I know how my people work.
Aaaanyway, how is everyone else doing? Are your fics coming along? Just a reminder, the due date is the eighth of March, and voting will start up the following morning, March ninth. Good luck to everyone!
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Feb 24, 2015 19:44:47 GMT
Yay!
It's coming along, but I still need to figure out what happens after the main thing I had in mind happens.
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Post by Mikauzoran on Mar 6, 2015 0:50:35 GMT
Hello all! Just a friendly reminder that the deadline for the competition is this Sunday the eighth.
How is everyone doing? Who all still has entries that they're working on?
Best of luck to everyone in the final days of writing!
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Post by ichthyophobia on Mar 6, 2015 1:18:04 GMT
I'm trying, I'm trying! Kogoro isn't cooperating. So my entry might not have a proper arc, but I will enter something!
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