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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Nov 29, 2014 14:19:01 GMT
I was about to give up this fanfic idea until I mentioned it in the chatbox and spoilers section (I believe in the theory of two mothers being sisters area) and a few people encouraged me by saying that they would read. So, I'm here looking for suggestions because this is going to take a LOT of work. This fanfic was born by one of those random thoughts about the boss of the Black Organization: What if Shinichi was Anokata? Of course, I knew this would never be true, so I thought in what ways I could make it true through a fanfic. Basically, the idea goes like this: Shinichi used to be the boss of the Black Organization decades ago, when it was still a good organization, maybe even meant to take down criminals. However, there was a revolt in the organization (need to figure out why) killing most of the good guys. Shinichi is overthrown and as he is trying to escape, either someone else forces him to or he himself (to guarantee his escape) take something that caused him to shrink for the first time. This time, however, he lost his memory and was taken in by the Kudous, which are blood-related to him (though I still don't know how. I've always thought it funny if he was older than them to begin with. Like their uncle or something O.o). Then, much later, he shrinks again into Conan XD So basically, I'm looking for problems still left to be solved, answers to those problems (doesn't necessarily have to be the same person), and just plain suggestions or ideas. I wasn't sure about when exactly this was taking place (present time or flashback time) until neonquincy asked what if his memories of pre-Kudou Shinichi came back to him, and I really liked that idea and took it as a suggestion So, any others?
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Post by Doku on Nov 29, 2014 16:02:09 GMT
It'd be pretty funny if he was Yusaku's dad - wouldn't it? We don't know much about Yusaku's past, so that's pretty much an open sandbox.
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Nov 30, 2014 22:41:54 GMT
Yeah, I was thinking that would be funny as well ^-^ Though I wasn't sure whether I should do it or not . . . Here is a link to the timeline of DC, which will probably be very helpful: www.detectiveconanworld.com/wiki/Timeline
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Post by neonquincy1217 on Dec 1, 2014 6:41:38 GMT
Oh darn, that's going to be a problem... Um, what about making him a relative of Pisco (or someone old) instead...? But still, 50 years ago, Yuusaku isn't even born yet. Oh, what about putting in another Kudou person in the picture? ah, I got nothing. We shall think of a way to make this work... somehow...? d'aww, and I was so looking forward to seeing this written (
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Post by StarlightDragons on Dec 1, 2014 13:20:09 GMT
Would nephew/uncle work? Or maybe great uncle! (uncle being Shinichi) XD
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Dec 1, 2014 13:22:39 GMT
Hm, that's true . . . Yeah, I think another person in the Kudou family would have to be the solution, unless anyone else has a better idea . . . ?
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Post by Mikauzoran on Dec 2, 2014 0:33:20 GMT
I'm liking the uncle/great-uncle idea for how Shin-chan's related to the Kudos. Then you don't really have to get too many OCs involved. Unless you wanted to create an extended Kudo family.
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Dec 2, 2014 0:36:47 GMT
I think great-uncle would make more sense timeline-wise. Pfffft, Conan being Yuusaku's great-uncle XD
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Post by StarlightDragons on Dec 2, 2014 1:03:39 GMT
Man that's awkward XD
...or you could involve Yukiko's failed attempt at indirectly calling Conan her son but ending up with uncle twice removed or something XD
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Dec 2, 2014 1:05:43 GMT
Lol. Okay, now that that's done, are there any other problems or suggestions?
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Post by StarlightDragons on Dec 2, 2014 1:09:57 GMT
Hm, what's your take on Vermouth's lack-of-aging in this story?
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Dec 2, 2014 1:32:50 GMT
Oh, I hadn't thought about that at all. Hmmmm . . . Well, she'd have to have taken a different drug than Shinichi, since Shinichi's allowed him to grow up (how else could he grow up with Ran?) whereas Vermouth has stayed the same age. I kind of want her to be involved in the whole revolt thing . . . Oh! How about she was on Shinichi's side during the revolt, but then was captured rather than killed because she showed promise? And she was forced to work for them! That would give a reason as to why she seems to want her Silver Bullets to destroy the Organization. As for when she first took that drug, I'd say soon after she was captured, she was a test subject for it. Ah yes, something I forgot. Before the revolt, the "bad guys" (since I have no idea what to call them), had been working on this immortality thing for a while underground (literally and metaphorically). That's why they were ready to test it on Vermouth as soon as they captured her. The question is, why'd they stop there rather than take that drug and leave? Oh, wait, maybe she was a special case, like Conan and Haibara, and they didn't want to risk dying. Oh, I forgot about whether Shinichi voluntarily took the drug to shrink or not . . . Wait, I have an idea. How about he went to Yuusaku and Yukiko (he had told them that he suspected a revolution a while ago, but he hadn't expected it so soon. No time to prepare) and told him his plan: He was going to take the pill - which he (or Vermouth ) had observed the effects of during the main fight - and that they would have to take care of him since he would lose his memory while shrinking to a 4 or 5 year old (slightly younger than the apotoxin). And then after that happened, they put him in Teitan Elementary where he met Ran? Ooh, ooh! How about Conan's pre-Shinichi memories come back in short little dream sequences??? *sweatdrops* That was a lot of ideas that came suddenly all at once . . .
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Post by StarlightDragons on Dec 2, 2014 1:50:16 GMT
those are all amazing ideas! sorry to spring another one on you, but are you going to involve Pandora and Kaito and his dad or...?
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Post by neonquincy1217 on Dec 2, 2014 1:58:52 GMT
Ooh, I like that last one (partly because I'm a sucker for dream sequences xDD).
I'm throwing this in as I type, so sorry in advance if something's amiss.
Just curious. I have questions and statements I'm thinking about: -the reason Yukiko doesn't seem to look older as she aged is also partly because of that experiment -The Kudos are also part of the org right? I mean they wouldn't agree on raising their great-uncle if they weren't -Supposing Shinichi's memories come back, he will know/have a general idea who Anokata is then right? -You can make use of Yuusaku's extensive police connections to help him cover the entire thing up -We can dig deeper on the fact that Vermouth seems to be really protective of Shinichi (and made that New York scenario a cover story for her actions) -OH!~ Funny thing... Since Heiji has always been Conan/Shinichi's confidante, if he remembers these memories in dream sequence (a little at a time), he would want to talk to him about it right? If Heiji notices that there's a peculiarity about these weird dreams he shall suspect about Shinichi and the Kudos and would secretly investigate on them, all the while his only goal is to help his best friend out of this sitch...
I shall add more if little gray cells cooperate :3
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Post by Nikudou Natsumi on Dec 2, 2014 2:05:04 GMT
*tsks* I haven't thought about that either. I was just trying to figure out the bare basics at the time, cuz even those are kinda complicated . . .
Well, let's see. We don't know much about that part of the organization so . . . How about I make a reference to it? Like there's talk of setting a group aside to find a fabled stone that grants immortality?
Oh wait, I keep forgetting present time XD So back in present time . . . Maybe. It would be fun to, but I suppose it depends on how the story goes. I haven't even come up with an ending yet . . .
XD my mind was wandering while I was writing the previous paragraph and thinking about what the ending would be like and suddenly an image of Conan pointing at and ordering around various Organization members came to mind XD
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